Drip. Drip. I'm so hollow inside that you can hear the obscene echo of my thoughts as they melt from my brain, pooling into a noxious waste somewhere near your feet. But you don't care. To you they're beautifully, but tragically tainted - a puddle with an ugly streak of oil which casts pretty colours if you happen to look the right way; fleetingly beautiful, but ultimately hideous.
Don't look too hard; you might see that these words are rotting - bleeding ink looks like gangrene, all purple and black and green. Tragically, disgustingly beautiful; and utterly wasted on you.
Hello there!
ReplyDeleteJust to let you know that I am impressed with your writing skills, I am in admiration of your writings because I too write...
Maybe I'll soon begin a blog with blogspot, If I do, I'll let you know ;)
David
Hi!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for reading, and also for taking the time to leave a comment. I'm flattered that you enjoy my writing!
If you do start a blog, which I hope you do, I will definitely have a read. I look forward to it!
Well actually I have already the blog...I'm not sure yet if I want to start a new one again...as it would take me much time to do it, and there's also the confidentiality thing which bothers me, as I write many personal things, I wonder if anyone can find my blogspot after on google with my mail address...which would really bother me^^
ReplyDeleteHere's a link to my blog : www.thelostbook.skyrock.com
Ooh, I like the name of your blog. You write poetry, I see. That's great! I'll have to sit down and read it all. If that's ok with you, of course. I can't read anything in French, but that's ok. Also, I see you're a Nightwish fan!
ReplyDeleteAs for blogspot and confidentiality, you can change your settings so that your blog can't be found via search engines. At least, you used to be able to. I haven't looked at the settings for a while. You can also password protect your blog.
:D thanks! I'll take time also to read all your posts too!
ReplyDeleteOf course it's okay for me, otherwise they wouldn't be on my blog lol XD
Yeah, sorry for the french parts, but don't worry, I write mainly in English...(not alway written in a correct way I must say). Yes I am a big fan of Nightwish...you too?
Hm I'll have to study about blogspot when I have some time, thanks for the informations ;)
See ya!
I look forward to sitting down and reading through them!
ReplyDeleteAnd yes, I am a fan of Nightwish too! It's always great to see that someone else likes them.
:D
ReplyDeleteOh that's so cool! You know that it's thanks to them that I found one night some inspiration and began writing?
I'm sure you'll read some hints (if we can call these hints XD) or allusions to some NW songs...characters or even concepts :P (I admit I am deeply influenced by their music/lyrics which led me to create my own imaginary world :D)
Me too! Their lyrics are absolutely incredible! The music too, of course. They singlehandedly inspired me to start writing. Poetry at first, but I was terrible at that, so moved on to prose. Don't worry, you'll find some references here too :) I think I even directly quoted Master Passion Greed once :P
ReplyDeleteYeah their lyrics are so....aaah i can't find a word to define them it's just magical, sincere ... Oh you too? Awesome! MPG? Really? Haha you'll find a text in my 1st chapter whose title and text is more than inspired by that song :D
ReplyDeleteBy the way, what is your name? =) I'm David ;)
Yes, that's exactly what the lyrics are like! They're so poetic, it's amazing.
ReplyDeleteOh brilliant! Haha, it's the best song when you're angry at something or someone.
My name's Mersini. Pleasure to meet you David :)